Monday, October 23, 2006

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Mandy is my new friend and classmate in Nantai. She is from Taichung County, and she used to live with her grandmother, parents, and younger brother. Now she lives in the dorm.


As Mandy was not majored in English before, her present educational goal is to get through smoothly. She works hard to enable her English ability. For example, she would check dictionary at once when she sees words that she doesn't know. She would also go to the grammar class of Teacher Nieh. After graduation, she would like to find a job that can combine business and English such as International Trade Business and Management or she would prepare the entrance exam of graduate school of Department of Leisure, Recreation, and Tourism Management.


In her spare time, Mandy likes to do sports and reading as her hobbies. She is interested in things that is interesting to her. Sometimes Mandy is very forgetful of bringing things so that she has to climb many stairs to get the things. I think she is easygoing, because she would not be angry if we make fun of her.


I'm impressed with Mandy's hard-working, and I think such hard-working would lead her to be successful in which getting a job or preparing the entrance exam of graduate school. It's nice to know that Mandy and I are both from Taichung, and it's good to talk to her because she is easy to get along with.

4 Comments:

Blogger eunice said...

she would like to find a job that can combine business and English such like International Trade Business........
You have to change "such like" into "such as". That would be better.

7:22 PM  
Blogger Ines said...

I feel your writing is not bad. Let me know a lot about Mandy.

8:21 PM  
Blogger Ryan said...

Oh...your writing is great.
I think I should learn how to use the skill of words from you.

10:02 PM  
Blogger mjk said...

Good

10:59 PM  

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