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MAIN IDEA
Who? Mandy Where? On the Internet When? October
BODY
a. Mandy is from 新社 in Taichung County, and she used to live with her grandmother, parents, and younger brother. At present times, her educational career goal is to get through smoothly.
b. She likes to do sports and reading as her hobbies. She's interested in something that is interesting to her. In the future, she would like to find a job that can combine business and English or she would prepare the entrance exam of graduate school of Department of Leisure, Recreation, and Tourism Management.
c. I'm impressed with Mandy's hard-working, she was not majored in English before, but she still want to learn more to combine English and what she has learned before to enable her ability to have a nice job.
CONCLUSION
It's nice to know that Mandy and I are both from Taichung, and it's good to talk to her because she is easy to get along with.
Who? Mandy Where? On the Internet When? October
BODY
a. Mandy is from 新社 in Taichung County, and she used to live with her grandmother, parents, and younger brother. At present times, her educational career goal is to get through smoothly.
b. She likes to do sports and reading as her hobbies. She's interested in something that is interesting to her. In the future, she would like to find a job that can combine business and English or she would prepare the entrance exam of graduate school of Department of Leisure, Recreation, and Tourism Management.
c. I'm impressed with Mandy's hard-working, she was not majored in English before, but she still want to learn more to combine English and what she has learned before to enable her ability to have a nice job.
CONCLUSION
It's nice to know that Mandy and I are both from Taichung, and it's good to talk to her because she is easy to get along with.
posted by nin at 9:28 PM
1 Comments:
OK. You can go ahead to write your essay. Yet, write something about Mandy's characteristics, and watch your grammar, esp. in C. Besides that, the following is a weird sentences - "She likes to do sports and reading as her hobbies, and she's intered in something that is interesting to her."
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